Pitch Reflection

My presentation

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Q&A

 

Questions 
In my presentation I believe that I could have explained the creativity in my idea's more than I did and how original it was for example when I spoke about the conventions that I was going to use I did not think that I explained it as well as I should had and this meant that whilst I was answering the questions that the audience gave me I had to explain it in more detail so that they had more of an understanding of what I wanted my music video to look like. In my music video I think that I gave enough detail on how practical my ideas were as I explained how we would get to certain places and how I would coupe if something came up for example if one of my actors could not make it I would work around them so that we can film on the days that they can do. In my idea's about my music video I think that I could have given more detail about technicality, for example I spoke about varied camera language and different shot types but I felt like i cold have spoken more about where and when in my music video that I would use this and also how I would use this. In my PowerPoint I believe that I should have explained music video theory for example conventions and Goodwin in more detail because when I was explaining it I felt that it was quite vague in the way that I described which types of conventions that I would be using.  

The strengths that the audience identified were that my target audience and interests for the target audience were appropriate the audience also agreed that the conventions that I was planning to use for example performance was good for my music video as they can visually see what the artist is like and also how they act. The audience thought that the practicality of my ideas were good as they could be done easily and without any problems they also thought that the creativity of my idea was good for example when i spoke about one of the lyrics (I learnt how to survive in year 5 ...) I said that I would have a shot of a child hustling for lunch money the audience agreed that i should have done this as they would then be able to visually see what the artist is rapping about.

The improvements that the audience identified were that instead of doing the whole of the chorus in the school studio to do it in the studio but have cuts to graffiti to get the atmosphere as alone and that they do not have anyone to go to ect. I also had another comment where Chloe asked if I would be able to expand on my locations instead of just using the studio and the backstreets this gave me time to think about what other locations i could possibly use throughout my music video to make it more interesting.

The changes that I would make due to the feedback I received are to add some more locations and also to have the cut away to the graffiti to also add to the atmosphere and the type of genre that I am doing I would also think about having in the 1st verse having the artist as a young person and then in the 2nd verse him being an adult and seeing the world as it is now and how it has not changed for him ect.